Femme de Lumière Outline Part 1

3rd person limited
parents were royalty
describe mom
describe dad
Instant Targets
hide from world
trying to live life normally
invasion of city
introduction to the haggers
called out for who you are
sentenced to death
hidden child
1st person
that was me
watch execution - beheading
running the fuck away
starving
cold
nasty smelling
miserable
homeless
alone
day-to-day
a cat
a back door
a warm glow
a family
observing happiness
a stranger
startled
wide eyes
my figure - skinny
wonder
being taken in
given affection
- food / drink
- a bath
- clothes
cat comes to play
a good night's sleep
warm blankets
soft skin
experiences- happy times w/rescuers
bliss to build a relationship
school
class mostly boring
interest in military
elementary friends
military games
telling of interest
but you're a girl
ok, if it makes you happy
off to school
a girl at a military school?
showin the bastards up
ms independent
want to get some food sometime?
a boy
what are boys
why do i feel like this?
new emotions
a hug
a kiss
a lot of kisses
confusion
really showin the boys up
getting attention
developing
do you know what sex is?
could be called rape
top of the class
graduation
separation
off to the military
boot camp
guns
swords
losing half my sight
artillery
fun stuff.

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Outline of "Are You Scared Yet?"

Some happy family experience... learning to shoot w/dad... going home for noms after... bliss
Attack on village - heroine's father goes down
escape from village
the horse and the carriage
managing to live
the first city - devastation of war
observation of the guild & calvin
the second city - meeting shu (hes lagging behind for some hilarious reason)
traveling with potatoe
pitfall
the cave
the SHIT INSIDE THE CAVE
victory
arrival at the metropolis
meeting vryali & tememn - the bffs
inspiration
meeting classy & looty - the secretary &the absent one who cares
observation of a meeting
wtf is that guy doing?
meeting calvin - the bastard fisherman
admittance to the guild & chat with the JB darlin'
Puddin runs the guild's bar
drinks with KJ - the sweetheart, DP - the bad influence, and Rhae - the kind of crazy guy
Jack is a bard. lol
observation of Az angry in a corner (♥ Az XD)
the next day:
off to breakfast!
Halo runs the bakery in town
observation of Furen being entranced by the pretty cakes in the bakery
observation of Draez purchasing his petit pains
observation of Wiggles and BigAl with their faces stuffed with pie - eating contest!!
On the street:
Humi, Trey, and Amethyst - trey thinks he is a damned pimp, but the girls put him in his place! teehee :3
PT following Calvin around asking "how i mine for fish"
Calvin going to fish market - explaining things to PT while fighting over fish market w/Deme
Meeting w/Leader Vry & JB
noticing Ari behind JB
Mission statement: helping the war effort
but for now, you're still a scrub, so go explore
Ari
departure
travel
observations of nature
sleeping - leaves awakening
do you mind if i tag along?
awkwardness
persistence pays off
some smiles and laughter
arrival
um, wtf are we doing?
oh good god - ominous feelings
ninjaing through
sighting of the goal
fighting
loss
panic
corner
sandwich
sweat, breath
shuuuush
a strike
WHAT?! That's out of character!
tending wounds
going to my new "home"
reunion